A 4-part fantasy story about a girl, her dragon, and the greatest test of trust and flight she’s ever faced. Part 2: The Gauntlet of Stone
A fragment of scale spun past her cheek, catching the sunlight like a shard of glass.
I didn't see a scrape. Was it the sudden lurch that fractured the scale?
Good catch. It implied that the dragon did scrape the tunnel wall for a second, but maybe I should make that more explicit.
Fixed it! Thanks for the feedback!
Cool! I was humming Test Flight from How to Train your Dragon while reading this.
Great job!
A fragment of scale spun past her cheek, catching the sunlight like a shard of glass.
I didn't see a scrape. Was it the sudden lurch that fractured the scale?
Good catch. It implied that the dragon did scrape the tunnel wall for a second, but maybe I should make that more explicit.
Fixed it! Thanks for the feedback!
Cool! I was humming Test Flight from How to Train your Dragon while reading this.
Great job!